Those who have waited long to see what my translation would compare to other versions of the bible shall wait no longer. May the joy of the Lord be yours. Amen.
"But it came to pass in those days that a decree went out from Ceasar Augustus that all the world should be registered."
Note that in the Greek text the word "that" is not used because it is not necessary, but in English it is or the sentence would not make grammatical sense. Another thing that you should notice is that in a NIV bible they use the word "census," but in a KJV and a NKJV bible, I think that the word meant is registered." One last thing to notice is that in the KJ version, they use the word, "there."
At this point, I am not saying that any version is any better than another because as an amateur at translating Greek that is beyond me. The point is to try and understand why these differences exist, which is in this verse there are few that call much attention to themselves except for the fact in the NI version, they use the word, "census," but in the KJ and the NKJ versions, they use the word, "registered."
What do those words mean?
Main Entry: cen·sus
Pronunciation: \ˈsen(t)-səs\
Function: noun
Etymology: Latin, from censēre
Date: 1634
1 : a count of the population and a property evaluation in early Rome
2 : a usually complete enumeration of a population; specifically : a periodic governmental enumeration of population
3 : count, tally
— census transitive verb
Main Entry: 2register
Function: verb
Inflected Form(s): reg·is·tered; reg·is·ter·ing \-st(ə-)riŋ\
Date: 14th century
transitive verb
1 a : to make or secure official entry of in a register b : to enroll formally especially as a voter or student c : to record automatically : indicate d : to make a record of : note e : perceive; also : comprehend
2 : to make or adjust so as to correspond exactly
3 : to secure special protection for (a piece of mail) by prepayment of a fee
4 : to convey an impression of : express
5 : achieve
intransitive verb
1 a : to enroll one's name in a registerb : to enroll one's name officially as a prerequisite for voting c : to enroll formally as a student
2 a : to correspond exactly b : to be in correct alignment or register
3 : to make or convey an impression
The words are so similar that they almost mean the same thing. A thing to note is that a census is taken by the Government and the word registered is a verb that is describing the act of filling out the necessary information for the Governement. Another thing that I will add to this is that according to the Greek lexcion that I have available means "registered."
May the peace of the Lord Jesus Christ be with you,
Nakwana Leofman
Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary. 2010.
Merriam-Webster Online. 20 January 2010